My Second Story Ever!
- janecallahanwriter
- Oct 28, 2020
- 3 min read
Look! My first blog post! As promised on my Instagram, here is the second story I ever wrote, written by 7 year-old your's truly. Spelling mistakes are included and go over to my Instagram if you want to see some pictures of the OG manuscript.
THE U.F.O
by jane callahan
When Jane and her friends a U.F.O that they name Steven adventures are in store.
Chapter 1: The worst day ever
As I went to bed I thought about the day. Our teacher thought we were going to have a big test. Like, So they didn't really mention anything on morning anounoements. But right as every one was going to begin, there was a anoucement. It was loud on the intercom,
"Excuse me boys and girds," The secraty started. "There has been a slight change for the test. The second ciriculum will not be taking the test this year.
I heard somthing outside "Great." I thought, my mom's home. But the car didn't sound exactly the same.
Chapter 2: The creature
I peeked out the window. It wasn't mom. It was somthing coming from the sky. It landed. I hurried and got my robe on and slippers. I saw the creature
Chapter 3: Meeting the little fellow
I called my freinds on the walky-talky. They met me there.
"Do you think it's a U.F.O?" Said my freind Sophia
"Might be" Said my friend Cameron.
"I think" Said my friend Maria.
"Well, There's only one way to find out" I said as I opened up capsul. There was a cute looking fisty looking monster. The in side of the capsale had the word "Mars" printed all over them. Cameron had a big trunick in his attic. We decided that we would put him in it. We named him Steven. (after my parachute that, We'll let's say it didn't make it."
Chapter 4: Planning
It was the last day of school. Five minutes till school was out. Me, Cameron, Sophia, And Mara planed to take a walk every night with Stephen. And since it was summer and all of our parents had this summer be a stay at home summer, we could sleep all day. The school bell rang. Fainal, I thought, School isout, I mowtioned my friends over.
"Remember." I said. "We meet at 10'0clock."
"We know." Said all my friends at the same time.
"And Cameron, you have to bring Stephen."
Chapter 5: The first walk
I woke up. It was 9:55
"Three minutes to get ready"! I whispered. I got ready with one minute to spare. Good. I thought. They are all ready.
"Do you have the leash"? I said to Cameron
"Yep." He said back.
"How about Steven"? I asked
"Oh." Said Cameron. "Sorry". He said.
"Lets go over to your house an see if anyone is awake". Sophia suggested. We went over to Cameron's house. The lights were on.
Chapter Six: If we got caught
We snuck into Cameron's house.
"It'm my sister Allie" Said Cameron.
We got to the second floor and we didn't get caught. We got to the third floor, the floor of the attic. I opened the door.
I turned around to see ahorable sight. There was Allie
Chapter Seven: What happnd next
Me and my friends were ground for the whole summer, but they still didn't find out about Steven. Finally his parents came and since we weren't grounded then we were able to say goodbye.
THE END
About the author
Jane Callahan's first book is indeed The U.F.O. She wrote this book at age 7. She lives with her 4 sisters and her only annoyed brother. Her favorite things to do our play with her best friends, Sophia and Cameron who are in this story. In her spare time, She reads Harry Potter books. She got Cameron to start the seires. She says she will live in Thailand.
Well, I hope you enjoy that! Message me on Instagram, comment on the post, or email me iff you want to see more of my past writing!
Hope you put pen to paper,
Jane Callahan
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